-Note:  In the process of creating this document (2016-06-14)
-
 This document is an explanation of why you might want to use the DAGMan _external sub-DAG_ and _splice_ features, and which one you might want to use in a particular situation.  (See
 {link: http://research.cs.wisc.edu/htcondor/manual/v8.5/2_10DAGMan_Applications.html#SECTION003108900000000000000}
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 The simple answer is that, unless you need one of the features that's
 available with external sub-DAGs but not with splices (see the table above), you should use splices.
-Splices are generally simpler and have less overhead than external sub-DAGs,
-unless the workflow is specifically designed to minimize the external
-sub-DAG overhead.
+Splices are generally simpler and have less overhead than external sub-DAGs
+(unless the workflow is specifically designed to minimize the external
+sub-DAG overhead).
 Also, workflow-wide throttling is generally more useful than separate
 throttles for sub-parts of the workflow.