7: Your download should automatically start; if it doesn't click the link "click here to download".
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-8: If you are using Safari: Google sent you a zip file, but your browser may have automatically opened up the zip, leaving you with a new folder named "HTCondor Design Documents."  If this is true, you'll need to create a new zip file of that folder.
+8: *If you are using Safari:* Google sent you a zip file, but your browser may have automatically opened up the zip, leaving you with a new folder named "HTCondor Design Documents."  If this is true, you'll need to create a new zip file of that folder.
 
-9: Ensure that the file is named something like HTCondor_Design_Documents-2013-09-21.zip , with the current date in the last part in year-month-date order.  If it's not already in that pattern, rename it.
+9: Ensure that the file is named something like =HTCondor_Design_Documents-2013-09-21.zip= , with the current date in the last part in =year-month-day= order.  If it's not already in that pattern, rename it.
 
-10: Copy the download into /p/condor/gittrac-backups/design-documents .  If you're not connected to the CS department's AFS, connect to a CS department computer with a tool like CyberDuck (Mac OS X), navigate to that directory, and upload the file.  Don't worry about other zip files already in the directory; we're keeping all of them for now.
+10: Put the download into our backup directory, =/p/condor/gittrac-backups/design-documents= . Don't worry about other zip files already in the directory; we're keeping all of them for now.
+*:: *I'm using my own Mac OS X computer:* Use a tool like {link: http://cyberduck.ch/ Cyberduck}.  You'll want to connect to a CS department Linux computer using "SFTP".  Log in with your CS department user name and password.  Navigate to =/p/condor/gittrac-backups/design-documents= and copy the zip file there.
+*:: *I'm on a CSL supported Linux computer:* Copy the file into =/p/condor/gittrac-backups/design-documents=
+*:: *I'm not on a CSL supported Linux computer, but I have AFS:* Copy the file into =/afs/cs.wisc.edu/p/condor/gittrac-backups/design-documents=
 
 9: _In a different folder_, unzip the archive and open at least one of the files to ensure it looks plausibly correct. You can delete the unzipped files afterward; we're just keeping the zip archive as a backup.