-One approach to using cloud resources to run HTCondor jobs is to use the =condor_annex= tool to expand an existing pool onto the cloud (see HowToUseCondorAnnexWithOnDemandInstances).  Another approach, documented here, is to create a new HTCondor pool entirely in the cloud.  The HTCondor team maintains an AWS Marketplace entry to help simplify the process[, but target-audience disclaimer].  These instructions assume you already have an AWS account and a key pair.
+One approach to using cloud resources to run HTCondor jobs is to use the =condor_annex= tool to expand an existing pool onto the cloud (see HowToUseCondorAnnexWithOnDemandInstances).  Another approach, documented here, is to create a new HTCondor pool entirely in the cloud.  The HTCondor team maintains an AWS Marketplace entry to help simplify the process[, but FIXME target-audience disclaimer].  These instructions assume you already have an AWS account and a key pair.
 
 {section: Overview}
 
@@ -6,12 +6,16 @@
 
 [FIXME: subsections, linkage]
 
-1: Starting a Head Node
-2: Adding Cloud Resources to Your New Pool
-3: Running Jobs
-4: Cleaning Up
+1: Start a Head Node
+2: Add Cloud Resources to Your New Pool
+2:: Log into your Head Node
+2:: Obtain an Access Key
+2:: Prepare Account
+2:: Add Cloud Resources
+3: Run Jobs
+4: Clean Up
 
-{section: Starting a Head Node}
+{section: Start a Head Node}
 
 1: Open HTCondor's {link: https://aws.amazon.com/marketplace/pp/B073WHVRPR Marketplace entry} in another tab.
 1: Click the orange 'Continue' button to the right.  You may need to log in to AWS at this point.
@@ -19,7 +23,7 @@
 1: This step is where you will start spending money.  Scroll back up; there will be section to the right titled "Price for your Selections."  That's what Amazon will charge starting when you click the orange 'Launch with one-click' button.  We'll remind you in these instructions, but you'll have to stop or terminate the instance your about to start on your own.
 1: On the next page, click on the "Your Software" link in the green box.
 
-{section: Adding Cloud Resource to Your New Pool}
+{section: Add Cloud Resources to Your New Pool}
 
 Your head node (by default) starts with two CPUs and 8 GiB of RAM.  Immediately after you log in -- see the next section -- you can start submitting and running jobs (see the section "Running Jobs", below).  However, with only two CPUs, you'll only be able to run two jobs at a time.  To add cloud resources to your pool, you'll use =condor_annex=.  To do that, you'll need to obtain an access key for =condor_annex=, so it can act interact with AWS on your behalf.  You'll only need to do that once.  Likewise, =condor_annex= has to do some one-time set-up for each account.  Once that's done, you can run =condor_annex= to add cloud resources as often as you like.
 
@@ -81,9 +85,9 @@
 
 You should keep a copy both files somewhere safe, so you don't have to recreate them every time you start a new pool in the cloud.
 
-{subsection: Running the Set-Up Command}
+{subsection: Prepare your Account}
 
-The following command will set up your AWS account.  It will create a number of persistent components, none of which will cost you anything to keep around.  These components can take quite some time to create; =condor_annex= checks each for completion every ten seconds and prints an additional dot (past the first three) when it does so, to let you know that everything's still working.
+The following command will prepare your AWS account for =condor_annex=.  It will create a number of persistent components, none of which will cost you anything to keep around.  These components can take quite some time to create; =condor_annex= checks each for completion every ten seconds and prints an additional dot (past the first three) when it does so, to let you know that everything's still working.
 
 {term}
 $ condor_annex -setup
@@ -94,9 +98,9 @@
 Setup successful.
 {endterm}
 
-{subsection: Checking the Setup}
+{subsubsection: Verify Account Preparation}
 
-You can verify at this point (or any later time) that the setup procedure completed successfully by running the following command.
+You can verify at this point (or any later time) that the account-preparation procedure completed successfully by running the following command.
 
 {term}
 $ condor_annex -check-setup
@@ -124,7 +128,7 @@
 
 {link: http://research.cs.wisc.edu/htcondor/manual/v8.7/6_Cloud_Computing.html Complete documentation} is also available.
 
-{section: Running Jobs}
+{section: Run Jobs}
 
 To run on your new resources, a job's submit file must contain the following line:
 
@@ -138,7 +142,7 @@
 should_transfer_files = TRUE
 {endverbatim}
 
-{section: Cleaning Up}
+{section: Clean Up}
 
 {subsection: The Cloud Resources}